How Would You Edit These Songs Or Would You?

[Soot and Stars]

The following are songs that go up to the 9 minute mark or beyond. After going into debate in another thread at whether a song is better off short or if length serves a song I decided to explore that here. Remember this is NOT a like it or don't song thread. Tell what would serve the song best constructively or don't bother. What parts could be taken out, what parts could stay or is the song fine as is! Let's try this!

First Song:

Jimmy Eat World-Goodbye Sky Harbor
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[annie]

or as I once posted elsewhere, "take a bad song and make it better" (sorry Sir Paul LOL)

 

[Slip'nn2Darkness]

It wasn't a badly done song.. I just couldn't hold onto the thing for 9 minutes..
I don't think my input is going to me much help on that tune..

 

[Magic]

Soot there seems to be a problem streaming the song from grooveshark. I tried 3 other versions, Grooveshark must be having some problems today. I will try again another time.

 

[Groovy Man]

I have AOL....Grooveshark never works on AOL. :mad

 

[Mr. Shadow]

Remove all the space between the notes.

 

[Soot and Stars]

O.K. guys I had the same trouble for a while but it's working now! Thanks for all who tried to check it out now and you can try it again if you're interested!