you know, Sergey, I don't think the song was the problem. It's just that the forum is almost deserted. Users rarely come here and there are less people posting and partecipating. This is unfortunately normal for forums, but I wish new users can still be coming and partecipating. However, let's continue till we can! ;-)
However, I'll rate both of your songs.
Sod.om's song has enjoyable rhythm and guitars. Nice melody. Vocals hmmm acceptable. 6,5/10
As for Paradise Lost's song, well, I think vocals are good, but music isn't exceptional: there is nothing in particular to remember about, but it's nevertheless enjoyable. Great tracks are others, though. 6,5/10